hmmm
a little to repetitive. in my opinion the percussion needs to be stronger, not louder, just, different kick sample would be good. a better bassLine would be a good change. i don't know really what to say...what i mean is, this is good as it is, but there just seems to be some missing element to this song and I'm getting really annoyed that i cant figure out what it is. lol. i do think that this would make a great DnB or BreakCore song.
5|5 8|10 ok!
DJ~CLYME
well
i can see where you where taking this. a couple of things that need improving.
the kick: needs to be flowing, not syncopated with the melody. i mean, its ok to have it like that if your using it like a pickup note basically. also you need a better sample then that one
the sounds: more specifically the presets. their overused, basically every artist uses those same presets from(i think the synth is sytrus). you might want to try making your own presets in sytrus.
the mastering needs to be better.(not much else to say about that)
you need a stronger bass.
the song, though it has horribly overused presets, is surprisingly well structured.
5|5 8|10 well structured! needs a little work though. :)
DJ~CLYME
Thank you clyme! Love to see a review and you obviously know what your talking about because yes 90% of the instrument used are sytrus. Though its not hard to change anything around thats mainly why i like ystrus i do find its the hardest to actually work with making your own sounds. id rather use toxic ir 3xosc. as for the bass i find its pretty loud i wanted to master it down a bit really so you could hear the others more. and for hte kick im just not the best at setting up intracite drum beats.
very nice
this is really good for atmospheric effects!
5|5 9|10 nice ;D
DJ~CLYME
I guess it means I'm making progress. xD Thanks a lot. Your stuff is nice too, by the way.
niiiccee
seems like i visited to new-grounds on the right day! so many impressive submissions today. this is definitely one of the best! one thing though, this should be under classical! that way i can finally say,.., OMG THERES FINALLY A CLASSICAL SONG ON NG LONGER THAN 1:30 LONG! lol :)
5|5 9|10 great work!
DJ~CLYME
Haha, thanks, man. I actually resubmitted this as requested by another user, so this is a higher quality submission. :D
idk what to say
so i guess my issue with this is i don't know what this is supposed to be. i mean it would make a great atmospheric effect in a horror movie. or maybe sounds like an engine or alarm or something. anyways...
5|5 7|10 good job at being,"randomly creative" ;D
DJ~CLYME
Hey, thanks! Yeah, I don't know either what it really made me feel. I just press a note on Sytrus and this sounds appeared. Pressing again and again and adding some weird... I don't know. But it took me hours to find the rest, but like the main sounds effect, it was try and error.
well
as random as this submisson is. its still pretty cool sounding. :)
5|5 9|10 nice!
DJ~CLYME
doin good so far!
so yeah, this definitely has a "dancey," feel to it. i think need to increase the volume of the base. also add a melody line to go along with the chords.
5|5 9|10 on the right track with this! :)
DJ~CLYME
Cheers mate!
I'll get around to fixing that soon.
not bad
though i think the synths should have had more of an 8-bit sound to them.
5|5 8|10 it not bad :)
DJ~CLYME
Thanks alot. again this was made back when i didnt know much about tecno or 8-bit music... so i honestly just grabed the first few synths i could find and went and found tetris. thanks for the critizem :D
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really., very impressive! i really liked the piano sample.
5|5 10|10 amazing!
DJ~CLYME
Thanks very much, I'm glad you liked it :D
lol
this is a VERY, fun song to listen to xD.
5|5 9|10 {4.51 / 5.00 (+ 0.86)} Good JoB! :)
DJ~CLYME
on a side note im sick of one person going through all the submissions and zer0 bombing em.
heh, thanks man. Glad you liked it.
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