uhmm
well... i think the worst thing about this is that the structuring isn't great. it basically sounds like a bunch of guys got together and started playing random instruments at the same time. the guitar is good(you need to edit the panning some, it would be better to pan to less to the left), the rhythm that starts at 0:55 needs to be edited(or removed from the song altogether). the bass~line isn't to bad, though you may want to get a stronger synth. now, about that Arp(at least that's what I think it is) that comes in at 0:49. i don't think its terrible, but the chord progression needs to be changed some cause its really throwing of the melody.
any offense that this review may cause is completely unintended. I just thought that since your song is getting zer0 bombed, you may like to know why. and what you could do to fix it.
3|5 6|10 just needs some work :)
DJ~Clyme