nice
well, overall, its pretty good. i think that it needs to flow together a little better. maybe edit the build up some. i do like that 8-bit style sound a lot!
5/5 8/10 cool!
DJ~CLYME
nice
well, overall, its pretty good. i think that it needs to flow together a little better. maybe edit the build up some. i do like that 8-bit style sound a lot!
5/5 8/10 cool!
DJ~CLYME
Thanks for the review :). I made this song with the demo of fl10, in the demo versions of fl you cant reopen you projects so it's really hard to edit your songs.
Anyway, i'll try to make a better build in my next songs, that's kind of a problem with all 5 songs i made so far :D. Also i'm about to submit 2 more songs right now, maybe you can have a look ;p.
DJ-Grapefruit
hmm
cellphone ring-tone comes to mind lol
4/5 7/10 {2.82 / 5.00 (+ 1.82) } lol nice
DJ~CLYME
Good idea. I think it's time I make one.
Thanks for the vote/score =)
cool
flows really smoothly! great for any video game.
5\5 9\10 nice!
DJ~CLYME
Cheers! Thanks for the kind comment =)
... not done
well finish it already!
5/5 9/10 nice!
DJ~CLYME
ah god way too much sub basss lol, thanks dude
well...
put more work into this and dont be such a pessimist, and you could have a pretty good hardstyle track here.
...whats hardstyle?
dude! WOW!
no, its not even close to the original. which is good cause if it sounded like the original i would have gotten bored and left without leaving a review to say that you need to FINISH this! the notes for the melody dont have to be perfect, after all, it is a remix. i really like the rhythm! the mastering needs a little work. and please get another snare(preferably a better sub-snare), the sample that your using just is just so overused....lol. i really like the way you used the piano in this remix!
anyway,
5\5 9\10 thanks for adding some originality to your remix. keep it up!
DJ~CLYME
Yeahh I am trying to make it sound as far away from the original as I can but maintaining the rhythm :P Thanks so much for the awesome review and I will get to work on that sub snare :)
It hasn't been mastered at all yet, just volume mastered. Ill try keep the standards up :D
very nice
so lets see...the only thing that really needs work is the piano in the beginning. if i did what zer0 bombers do and rate a song by the way the first 10 seconds sound, i would have voted zero also. fortunately i don't do that, cause if i did i would have missed out on i really nice piece!
now, i think that if you were to add some more reverb and maybe a small delay effect to the piano, you would have a better chance of people listening to the entire song and not just the first ten seconds. because right now the piano sounds really flat and uninteresting in the beginning. other than at the start of the song the piano sounds fine though.
5\5 9\10 amazing!
DJ~CLYME
Hm.... I really hadn't thought of that, but THANKS A LOT!
Will do, I'm probably gonna make another version and edit this one... Thanks a lot again ^^
Rock On!!
nice!
this is great! drums definitely need more "umpth" though. the synth that comes in at 3:01 might sounds better if a reverb effect was added.
5/5 9/10 nice!!
DJ~CLYME
Thanks for the kind words man :)
Yeah still trying to get used to the finer details of logic. I should just get off my ass, watch some tutorials and pimp the drums up haha :P
wow
this is amazing! the panning is absolutely incredible. it gives this song a lot of texture!
5\5 10\10 nice job!
DJ~CLYME
Thanks very much Clyme! :D
nice
now i kinda want to go to a cafe and get a cup of coffee lol.
it makes you want coffee?
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