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after hearing "silver memory", and now this. i feel really sad. :/
is there anymore to this story? i've looked but i didnt see anything.
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after hearing "silver memory", and now this. i feel really sad. :/
is there anymore to this story? i've looked but i didnt see anything.
hmm...
i give it a eight. i do like this a lot, but your lead synth just kills it. it sounds to much like a FL Studio preset. the synth that comes in at 0:29 needs to be a lot louder. the bridge at 1:32 seems a little sudden. and up until 1:34 your bass is really weak and i guess in a way, understated, i think adding more sub would help fix that problem.
really though, the idea is good, there just needs to be a little more work done. :)
anyway, 5/5 8/10 good effort. ;)
wow!
this is really impressive! kinda makes me feel like im looking over an area of absolute desolation.
the only problem is that the song sounds really muffled, which could be due to bad mixing or mastering... idk.
Desolation describes it pretty well.
Both mixing and mastering could've used some work..but im too big a dumb-dumb. I seldomly invest time into such. I just enjoy composing memorable melodies :C
Thank you very much for your review DjClyme!
its good
just needs to be longer! :)
well
its not really that bad. just needs a little mastering. maybe adding a bassline would also be nice.
Thanks for your review :)
I know it's nothing special. I suck at mastering stuff. lol But if you would like to beef it up and tweak it I say go for it :)
cool!
i like this a lot actually! though, the mastering needs some work.
yep
i seem to like it
so lengthen it. :3
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