well now
this is awesome! i suddenly feel like remix this again lol
5/5 10/10 nice work!
DJ~CLYME
well now
this is awesome! i suddenly feel like remix this again lol
5/5 10/10 nice work!
DJ~CLYME
first attempt?
well this is amazing for a first try! actually...it just amazing. i really like the side-chaining.
5/5 9/10 niceee!
DJ~CLYME
Yeah I've never done trance before this song. Glad you liked it.
Thanks for the review.
~{425}~
again...WOW
this is amazing! stupid no nothing zer0 bomberZ! i mean seriously? how can you vote 0 on this?
lol anyway, 5/5 9/10 nice job!
DJ~CLYME
hahah thanks dude! :)
well....
the idea of rain maybe...i think you should use less arpeggios. also your synth that starts in the beginning should be softer. that would give it a more rainy sound. you may also want to think about using some delay and reverb effects. that would help a lot!
4/5 {3.65 / 5.00 (+ 0.65) } 8/10 not bad!
DJ~CLYME
Okay!
Thanks for the suggestions and review!
Although there are effects in the program I use, I can't figure out how to use them...
so..
its not bad. i think it would be better if the synths were more 8-bit style!
5/5 8/10 not bad! :)
DJ~CLYME
cheers man, I'd like to make that change to 8bit synths but i cannot find them on FL studios. When i do though i'll make a nice lil 8bit song haha
wow
annoying, in a strangely amusing way.... nice.
5/5 9/10
DJ~CLYME
also, I left my credit card
HAHAHAHA, thats awesome lol. please make more! xD
5/5 10/10 LOL
DJ~CLYME
ok.
so anyway, here is some,.,"accurate criticism", for you!
the first thing is, try to avoid using the sytrus presets. instead, try to make your own(that might be kinda hard since you use the demo).
your song needs more atmosphere. there's parts in your song that sound really empty, which tends makes it sound really boring. maybe add in a nice pad to fill in the gaps.
your bass. you don't have one! that definitely needs to be added.
also, this really needs to be mastered.
5/5 7/10 needs a little work. ;)
DJ~CLYME
Thanks for checking out my songs :D.
Ok about the bass, yes you are right (nothing more to say really)
Empty parts--> I'll try to fill it up some more ;)
Mastering--> I'll start on it right away thank you.
DJ-Grapefruit
nice!
this is just amazing! cant wait to hear more from you!
5/5 9/10 WOW!
DJ~CLYME
Thanks a lot for taking your time to listen to my song! I also checked out and love your stuff, by the way. I'll be uploading this really grooving industrial track next week, so please check it out when it's out. Thanks again and take care!
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