you definitely worked hard on this
overall, i enjoy this a bit! i love that pad that starts out at the beginning. I could never figure out how to use it in a song, finally someone did! one thing that could be improved. your bass needs to be fatter(PM me if this doesn't make sense), also you might want to add some more Sub~bass to it.
5|5 9|10 not bad :)
DJ~CLYME