DjClyme's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[xKore - Fire]

wooow

i cannot WAIT for the finished version to be complete!!!

5|5 10|10 niiiccee! ;)

DJ~CLYME

[Miss Maybellene(REMIX)]

cool

really enjoyable song you made! cant wait for more. :)

5|5 9|10 great remix!

DJ~CLYME

Keegs responds:

Thanks!

I'll be sure to check your stuff out, too!

[D Kexer - Sunrise]

wow

everything sounds absolutely amazing, and shouldn't be changed! although i think that you need to add some more sweep effects or soft synths something to add more of an atmosphere to the song . like at 1:17 and other parts like it, the song begins to sounds a little empty. other than that... this is an amazing piece!

5|5 9|10 nice work!!!

DJ~CLYME

[The Shifting Sands]

well....

this is different....but kewl!!!

5|5 9|10 niiiccee!

DJ~CLYME

DJ-Babokon responds:

Thanks you!!!

[-KA89- 180BPM WIP]

ok so a few things aren't that great...

but i can see this turning into something amazing with a bit of time and effort.

here are a few things that i think could use improving:

1. 0:00 ~ 0:10 your chord progression is ok(I really like the ARP you use). but the melody doesn't fit well with it and needs some heavy editing.
(some of the notes sound like they were played as sharps or flats when none were needed).

2. 0:10 ~ 0:20 same chord progression with a different melody. the melody in this section fits better than the previous, but still sounds off key somehow.

3. 0:21 ~ 0:26 still,., same chord progression as the two previous sections. melody same as 2nd section but sped up, and kick+hat+snare also added.
the #1 problem with this section is the kick. it would be MUCH, better NOT to have it on the up and down beat. it would sound much better if it was on the up beat only. the hat and snare are fine if left alone. the sped up melody sounds ok also.

4. 0:27 ~ 0:37 is i guess the part C in this song. the first synth to start isn't to bad. but the arp(i think its a poizone or toxic biohazard preset) absolutely killed this section for me. you may want to think about adding a different arp.

5. 0:37 ~ 0:49 is basicly the same as section 4. EXCEPT... there's that annoying kick again. that really needs to be changed.

adding a bassline on the down beat would be good. maybe consider adding some fading in and out transitions like at the beginning and at 0:37.

this is all i can really fit into this review and its probably confusing since I'm limited to how much I can write, and I'm not that great of a writer or explaining things either ;). so feel free to PM me if you need any help figuring out what i meant by something, or if you just need help with anything else.

3|5 6|10 needs work, but has potential. :)

DJ~CLYME

Kyleadam89 responds:

I actually found this to be of much help, I use/program my own synths with sytrus . . I know the kick drum is heavy, I am new to the whole music scene, I only have 2 years experience, mostly just making new synths and learning to use things better. . .but I will definitely improve upon this based on your review and the reviews of others, THanks a ton! as time passes I hope to make this into what it's supposed to be, I would also like to thank you for taking the time to review my work! by the way how would you rate my mastering? on a scale out of 5, if thats not asking too much.

[To Love]

nice

great song! the beginning was a little slow, but thats ok. lol ;D

5|5 9|10 great work!

DJ~CLYME

Ragezero responds:

Thank you :) I tried to put the extra bells in as soon as possible to liven up the intro :) But well, a (fake) trumpet is just a must in romantic anime's :p It's called to love for a reason ^^ Glad you enjoy it!

[Cosmetic Waves (Collab)]

Ambient?

sounds more like trance to me. anyways, nice work! cant wait for more (if there is more) to come.

5|5 9|10 great work!

DJ~CLYME

ThePal responds:

There will be. :)
Well, I'd say it's a mix of both Ambient and Trance, I just felt that it fitted more in the Ambient genre then Trance. :)

Thanks for listening. :)
You should check out GamekrazzyProduction's music out as well if you liked this. :)

[Hyper extended]

not bad

so the one thing about this i don't like is the repetitiveness. but because its only 1:37 that isnt really a problem. xD

5|5 8|10 {2.90 / 5.00 (+ 0.36)} nice! :)

DJ~CLYME

Lakloplak responds:

Thank you for the review and vote! I know it is a bit boring at some points, but that's because it was meant to be a background song. Then it doesn't matter at all.

[Open Your Eyes (EoE) Hardstyle]

im not a big fan of hardstyle...

but this is pretty cool! i might suggest that the kick in the beginning be mastered better. other then that, nice! :)

5|5 9|10 {5.00 / 5.00 (unchanged)} nice work!

DJ~CLYME

FrameWork responds:

I'll have look! Probs do an edit and thanks for the good review :D

[-Destiny-]

not bad

so i like this alot. the piano melody is to simple and would be a lot better if more was added to it. the snare at 2:41 is so overused, maybe get a better sample(if you need one I have a few i could send you some how). and one other thing, the lead synth is a little repetitive, it would make this a ton better to add a second melody!

overall this is going to be a great piece and i cant wait to hear the final vesion!

5|5 8|10 nice work so far :)

DJ~CLYME

MrAlbino07 responds:

yeh i agree with the lead, ive just been having trouble creatively trying to make it better. As for the piano im not sure what to do with it yet. Hopefully i can figure it out.

Thanks for the review :D