DjClyme's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Afternoon]

different

i like it! though it needs a lot of mastering! one other thing, you need to increase the volume of the drums, cause their barely audible.

5/5 8/10 not bad. ;)

DJ~CLYME

DarkNek0 responds:

Yeah I intentionally kept the drums quieter than normal, but I might have gone a little too soft, thanks for the feedback!

[Memories ~]

wow

this is great! i enjoyed the entire song. ;)

5/5 10/10 great work!

DJ~CLYME

DatBoiNC responds:

Thanks. Much appreciated.

[Step in the Dub]

this is decent.

a couple of minor details though...

that snare sample is just not cutting it. what would be good is to replace it with a Sub-snare.

your kick sample is good. though it does need to be mastered more so that it doesn't clip so badly.

the wobble on your bass needs to be a bit more,..,randomized?. lol i don't know if that even makes since.

anyway, good work. this is definitely good for a first attempt!

5/5 9/10 nice

DJ~CLYME

Theledge93 responds:

Yeah, i don't know how to randomize it. i watched a youtube vid on how to make it, then i gave it a try to randomize it on the drop, then it sounds off after that. thanks. glad you like my friend.

[Mex - DubAudio]

really amazing!

wow, i was really impressed with this song! cant wait to hear more from you!

5/5 10/10 niiiccce

DJ~CLYME

darthduba responds:

Cheers ^^

[Touched-]

so..

overall, not bad. the one issue, is that "high pitched frequency". if your going to use something as loud at that. then it has got to be mastered much more.

other then that, not bad!

5/5 8/10 cool! yet very eerie...

DJ~CLYME

ParagonOfDolor responds:

It's meant to be a piercing sound that red lines. In an early version of this song it was even louder and higher to the point it was distorted and would drown out the other sounds, but it was a bit too much. Thank you for the feedback.

[Last Stand ¨Nick¨]

you did good...

more like great!

here are some things that stand out to me:

the strings. their amazing. what i was really glad to hear was that the attack wasn't so bad that it caused them to sound off beat.

the percussion. overall,..,amazing! the one bass drum sample may need to be mastered a little more though. i feel like it interferes with the lower section of the string ensemble.

i love the those vocals at 1:38. i think that they could be turned up so their a little more noticeable.

good climax to the song.

a lot of times when people make classical pieces, the ending is often to sudden. but you did really well with the end of this song!

overall, incredible! i enjoyed "every second of it!"

5/5 10/10 the work you put into this had definitely paid off! :)

- DJ~CLYME

NickKaedallus responds:

Thank you VERY VERY much for your review!

Well, I had a little problem with the Timpani, because in some sections it was too loud, in others too low. But I will be more careful in the next one, thanks.

Also, the voices, I really tried, but they were at max volume and everything, and yet they weren't audible enough. I'll probably remaster it and upload again soon.

Well, thank you very much for the compliments and critics!

Rock On!!

[Until The Sun (Original S]

wooaahh

man I'm glad i decided to listen to this! definitely worth it! great work!

5/5 10/10 amazing!

DJ~CLYME

seatellite responds:

thanks man!

[Resistance_]

well

so...really the only annoying think about this is your bass. its sequenced well, but it needs to be less... choatic and repetitive. i think if you were to have more chord changes and add a melody this wouldnt get zero bombed so badly.

anyway, 5/5 8/10 {2.51 / 5.00 (+ 0.70)} not bad! :)

DJ~CLYME

kulajs responds:

thx for review i apreciate that,and i will sure make some WIP and use some of the advices;)

[[JL] Tread Lightly]

nice

overall, really good! your transitions need to be a little more noticeable.

5/5 9/10 nice!

DJ~CLYME

JohnLeprechaun responds:

Thanks for the review, I'll keep that in mind.

[Dreamin'n Steamin]

my thoughts...

well. heres some "constructive criticism" for you. xD

0:00 - 0:27 amazing build up! a little to fast for house though. it sound more like dance to me.

0:27 - 0:54 there are a couple issues. you need a stronger bass synth, preferably one with more sub. it also sounds a little out of place cause it sounds more like dubstep style bass.

0:54 - 1:22 you need more atmosphere to this. i would suggest adding a nice pad with a side-chaining effect.

1:22 - 1:37 i just noticed something else with the bass. it would be a lot better to have it playing on the down beat so that its not playing on the same beat as the kick.

1:37 - 2:59 basically same issues as above. love the vocals lol

anyway, 5/5 8/10 not to bad for first attempt ;)

DJ~CLYME

krumme73302 responds:

thanks for the advices :)
i will think about them and learn from them in my future productions :)