DjClyme's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[TMB-Sunrise]

a few issues..

overall, not bad!

my thoughts:

change the hi-hat samples. the ones your using don't really mesh well with the rest of the song.

rearrange the build ups. their a bit to sudden. also theres to many of them. with as many as you have in this song, it begins to sound a little,..,loose maybe? that probably doesn't make much sense lol. i guess what im trying to say is that, there doesn't seem to be really in climax to the song. it just sort of drones on.

the pad at 1:18. seems a little off beat. i think this could be due to the amount of attack that it has. i would suggest turning it down a little. also, it seems to come in a little suddenly. it might sound better if you where to have it fade in rather than being so sudden.

the bass is nice. a little more sub could be added to it though.

anyway, 5/5 8/10 {3.56 / 5.00 (+ 0.60) } not bad! :)

DJ~CLYME

riptide11 responds:

wow thanks for the feedback hahah your the first person who actually knows about music. yeah this is still a work in progress. yeah i agree with you on the hi hat and the pad that you hear is just a thing i put in place of the pad that you hear with the piano. You seem to know a lot about music if you use fl studio or ablelton live message me, and maybe we could collaborate on a song.
-TMB

[.:TD - Let Go - Remix]

my thoughts...

impressive intro!

really good build up to 00:55

at 1:10 the kick seems a little clicky sounding. this could be due to the bitrate though. i would also suggest making it a little more audible.

the synths are really nice. the lead synth in particular.

the fading in and fading out of the synths are amazing!

so far, its not to lengthy.

i don't know if you've mastered this yet. but it sounds like you have.

i cant wait to hear the full version of this!

5/5 9\10 epic trance! keep up the good work! :)

DJ~CLYME

TomDavies responds:

Thank you! The pads and leads are from AnjunaBeats them selves! They're the official ones you hear on major Trance tunes :)

I thought the same for the kick, making it a little bit more meaty for the final version.

Many thanks!

[{425} Trance]

first attempt?

well this is amazing for a first try! actually...it just amazing. i really like the side-chaining.

5/5 9/10 niceee!

DJ~CLYME

Michael425 responds:

Yeah I've never done trance before this song. Glad you liked it.

Thanks for the review.

~{425}~

[Chillax Trance]

again...WOW

this is amazing! stupid no nothing zer0 bomberZ! i mean seriously? how can you vote 0 on this?

lol anyway, 5/5 9/10 nice job!

DJ~CLYME

Lalalo14 responds:

hahah thanks dude! :)

[~EG~ Drizzle]

well....

the idea of rain maybe...i think you should use less arpeggios. also your synth that starts in the beginning should be softer. that would give it a more rainy sound. you may also want to think about using some delay and reverb effects. that would help a lot!

4/5 {3.65 / 5.00 (+ 0.65) } 8/10 not bad!

DJ~CLYME

ElectricityGame responds:

Okay!
Thanks for the suggestions and review!
Although there are effects in the program I use, I can't figure out how to use them...

[Forthcoming]

so..

its not bad. i think it would be better if the synths were more 8-bit style!

5/5 8/10 not bad! :)

DJ~CLYME

dude-im-alive responds:

cheers man, I'd like to make that change to 8bit synths but i cannot find them on FL studios. When i do though i'll make a nice lil 8bit song haha

[Exploding Melons - DJ-G]

ok.

so anyway, here is some,.,"accurate criticism", for you!

the first thing is, try to avoid using the sytrus presets. instead, try to make your own(that might be kinda hard since you use the demo).

your song needs more atmosphere. there's parts in your song that sound really empty, which tends makes it sound really boring. maybe add in a nice pad to fill in the gaps.

your bass. you don't have one! that definitely needs to be added.

also, this really needs to be mastered.

5/5 7/10 needs a little work. ;)

DJ~CLYME

DJ-Grapefruit responds:

Thanks for checking out my songs :D.
Ok about the bass, yes you are right (nothing more to say really)
Empty parts--> I'll try to fill it up some more ;)
Mastering--> I'll start on it right away thank you.

DJ-Grapefruit

[When The End Came]

nice!

this is just amazing! cant wait to hear more from you!

5/5 9/10 WOW!

DJ~CLYME

als3t responds:

Thanks a lot for taking your time to listen to my song! I also checked out and love your stuff, by the way. I'll be uploading this really grooving industrial track next week, so please check it out when it's out. Thanks again and take care!

als3t

[The Worst Looop]

just...wow

up until 00:51 i was like, man this could be an amazing dance song! i mean, up to that point would work just fine as an intro. mastering needs a little work. but thats no big deal. definitely consider making this into a full length song!

5/5 8\10 wow!

DJ~CLYME

Lalalo14 responds:

I thought for sure that all I was going to get was the big ZeroBombz! :)

But thanks for your review, I might consider making a song of it now =D