not bad
only thing that needs to be changed in my opinion are the chords. nothing huge, its just that hey sound to..,thick? maybe less notes being played at a time.
5/5 8/10 cool
DJ~CLYME
not bad
only thing that needs to be changed in my opinion are the chords. nothing huge, its just that hey sound to..,thick? maybe less notes being played at a time.
5/5 8/10 cool
DJ~CLYME
Thank you DjClyme, for the review :)
The thickness of the sound is part of the atmosphere i aimed for - but i'll try out your advice, just to see the effect
Glad you liked it!
hmmm
8-bit-ish classical... lol. needs to be in some video game.
4/5 8/10 (3.70 / 5.00 (+ 0.10))
DJ~CLYME
Thanks, I appreciate your comment :) as to whether it would work well in a video game, who knows...
smooth...
very relaxing, i can see this being used for improv rap or break dancing.
5\5 9\10 nice
DJ~CLYME
These tracks are rare but neatly) Soon more will be
lol
generic.., but still nice. also needs a BassLine, or more Sub. :)
5/5 8/10 nice!
DJ~CLYME
This review made no sense what so ever. How is this generic? and the song does have a bassline, you might just be death
nice
this is really amazing!
5|5 9|10 great work!
DJ~CLYME
Thanks dude :).
cool!
overall this is really good! though i think that some of the sytrus presets need to be edited(or make your own). because they are used so often that sometimes i think that people get tend bored easier with the song. the FL slayer was ok, to me it was a little cheesy though. in my opinion, remove the FL slayer and use a different synth, or maybe FL keys with a nice delay effect. i really like the rhythm! The one synth that definitely need to be changed is that sytrus preset, uhm,..., i think its formant maybe. i really like that pad at 1:15. it creates a good atmosphere. i dont think this is dnB, mostly cause the tempo is about 30 ~ 40 BPM to slow for this genre. for some reason i feel like this could be bordering on being industrial maybe?
anyways, 5|5 9|10 {3.01 / 5.00 (+ 0.69)} nice job!
DJ~CLYME
Thanks for checking out! :) You might be right about the Sytrus presets (I think you prefer to "Fry" right?), that some maybe should some much editting if it should be original, but I quite dig it as it is, and it's quite the same about the FL Slayer, I tried to get some effects working out on that one, so that it doesn't sound all familiar.
You might be right about the genre choice, I'll set it under that genre then. :)
Else, many thanks for your review, I really apreciate it! I'll return the favor. ;)
well
i can see where you where taking this. a couple of things that need improving.
the kick: needs to be flowing, not syncopated with the melody. i mean, its ok to have it like that if your using it like a pickup note basically. also you need a better sample then that one
the sounds: more specifically the presets. their overused, basically every artist uses those same presets from(i think the synth is sytrus). you might want to try making your own presets in sytrus.
the mastering needs to be better.(not much else to say about that)
you need a stronger bass.
the song, though it has horribly overused presets, is surprisingly well structured.
5|5 8|10 well structured! needs a little work though. :)
DJ~CLYME
Thank you clyme! Love to see a review and you obviously know what your talking about because yes 90% of the instrument used are sytrus. Though its not hard to change anything around thats mainly why i like ystrus i do find its the hardest to actually work with making your own sounds. id rather use toxic ir 3xosc. as for the bass i find its pretty loud i wanted to master it down a bit really so you could hear the others more. and for hte kick im just not the best at setting up intracite drum beats.
very nice
this is really good for atmospheric effects!
5|5 9|10 nice ;D
DJ~CLYME
I guess it means I'm making progress. xD Thanks a lot. Your stuff is nice too, by the way.
niiiccee
seems like i visited to new-grounds on the right day! so many impressive submissions today. this is definitely one of the best! one thing though, this should be under classical! that way i can finally say,.., OMG THERES FINALLY A CLASSICAL SONG ON NG LONGER THAN 1:30 LONG! lol :)
5|5 9|10 great work!
DJ~CLYME
Haha, thanks, man. I actually resubmitted this as requested by another user, so this is a higher quality submission. :D
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