im not a big fan of hardstyle...
but this is pretty cool! i might suggest that the kick in the beginning be mastered better. other then that, nice! :)
5|5 9|10 {5.00 / 5.00 (unchanged)} nice work!
DJ~CLYME
im not a big fan of hardstyle...
but this is pretty cool! i might suggest that the kick in the beginning be mastered better. other then that, nice! :)
5|5 9|10 {5.00 / 5.00 (unchanged)} nice work!
DJ~CLYME
I'll have look! Probs do an edit and thanks for the good review :D
not bad
so i like this alot. the piano melody is to simple and would be a lot better if more was added to it. the snare at 2:41 is so overused, maybe get a better sample(if you need one I have a few i could send you some how). and one other thing, the lead synth is a little repetitive, it would make this a ton better to add a second melody!
overall this is going to be a great piece and i cant wait to hear the final vesion!
5|5 8|10 nice work so far :)
DJ~CLYME
yeh i agree with the lead, ive just been having trouble creatively trying to make it better. As for the piano im not sure what to do with it yet. Hopefully i can figure it out.
Thanks for the review :D
again...
very nice! though the description seems just a little paranoid. lol xD
5|5 10|10 great song!
DJ~Clyme
Thanks for another nice review! Paranoid? Nah, just being scary descriptive. :)
I do feel bad for anyone plagued by frequent nightmares, though...
WOW
epic song! definitely one of my fav's on newgrounds!
:D Thanks a lot !
nice
definitely worth 4:55 minutes of my life listening to this ^^
Cool!...Yeah cuz I hate wasting folks time, lol. Thx for the review!
wow
this is great! sounds like video game music lol.
5|5 9|10 nice!
DJ~Clyme
Didn't expect so much positive feedback for this! haha.
Review is appreciated! thanks
not bad
one think that kills this is the mastering. like when the bass comes in at 1:52 its to loud. other than that nice :)
My headset sucks and it doesnt do what i want, so i didn´t really recionized that it is to loud and much louder than enything else, I´m sorry for that. If i have time i take care of that tomorrow.
However, Thank You.
epic
very, very good job! i love the piano the best. lol
5|5 10|10 wow!
DJ~Clyme
piano is pretty sweet
nice
i hope you finish this remix. its really, REALLY great. lol
Thanks bro! if i think of any inspiring ways that i can change up the original song, ill be sure to put something up here!
uhmm
well... i think the worst thing about this is that the structuring isn't great. it basically sounds like a bunch of guys got together and started playing random instruments at the same time. the guitar is good(you need to edit the panning some, it would be better to pan to less to the left), the rhythm that starts at 0:55 needs to be edited(or removed from the song altogether). the bass~line isn't to bad, though you may want to get a stronger synth. now, about that Arp(at least that's what I think it is) that comes in at 0:49. i don't think its terrible, but the chord progression needs to be changed some cause its really throwing of the melody.
any offense that this review may cause is completely unintended. I just thought that since your song is getting zer0 bombed, you may like to know why. and what you could do to fix it.
3|5 6|10 just needs some work :)
DJ~Clyme
Oh, right, fair enough then. I'll try and sort that out. Cheers :)
EDIT: I'm going to upload an edited version when I can, K? Hopefully quite soon. But thanks for that. I wish more people would tell me when I'm going wrong, especially on Back Alley and Splinter.
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