DjClyme's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[6. The Formula]

uhmm

well... i think the worst thing about this is that the structuring isn't great. it basically sounds like a bunch of guys got together and started playing random instruments at the same time. the guitar is good(you need to edit the panning some, it would be better to pan to less to the left), the rhythm that starts at 0:55 needs to be edited(or removed from the song altogether). the bass~line isn't to bad, though you may want to get a stronger synth. now, about that Arp(at least that's what I think it is) that comes in at 0:49. i don't think its terrible, but the chord progression needs to be changed some cause its really throwing of the melody.

any offense that this review may cause is completely unintended. I just thought that since your song is getting zer0 bombed, you may like to know why. and what you could do to fix it.

3|5 6|10 just needs some work :)

DJ~Clyme

SeeNoSanity responds:

Oh, right, fair enough then. I'll try and sort that out. Cheers :)

EDIT: I'm going to upload an edited version when I can, K? Hopefully quite soon. But thanks for that. I wish more people would tell me when I'm going wrong, especially on Back Alley and Splinter.

[Desert Deciet]

hmmm

well this is something a bit new to me... I find it i bit, intriguing?...

CrackMasterK responds:

Thank you, i went for a really different sound with orchestral instruments and ethnic drums and acoustics some with effects some without.

[Moonlight sonata {[Remix]}]

not bad

so i like everything except the pad. its not bad, just way to loud. and the base needs to turned up or something. other than that this is great.

5|5 9|10 nice!

BTW what synth is that at 2:27?

DJ~Clyme

Mrxtreem85 responds:

Thx for voicing your opinion, appreciate it. =)

Done some recent tweaking and i have to agree with you, with the pad down and the bass more defined it sounds a fair bit cleaner for some reason. =P

And the synth at specified time is the Stellar wasp in FL studio.

Thx again. ^_^

[Dear Japan]

very nice

the song may not have been perfect. but the sentiment is good, and the lyrics are great. any one who zer0 bombs this has no heart.

5|5 10|10 great work!

<~DJ Clyme~>

DJMagista responds:

Thanks. Feel free to tell me what isn't perfect. I'm no expert yet but I can always try to improve.

[Everything Is Moving]

wow

really really great! i agree with 2dpolygon though. it does sound a lot like breakbeat,
yet does have a housy feel to it. :)

5|5 10|10 great job!

<~DJ Clyme~>

DJDuk responds:

Yeh i didn't quite know how to put it into genre, but I think it fits more in house. Thnx for comments!

[Perfect Afternoon [Cmdtri]

interesting

so its uh..., definitely simple, but not bad. i would really suggest you try to do something about the cheesy FL keys. that's whats killing this song for me.

5|5 8|10 simple, but nice ;)

<~DJ Clyme~>

Cmdtrigun responds:

Thanks for the advice man

[Ash Flowers]

sad is understated

its awful, almost a crime! :(.... that its only 25 seconds long! OmG make it like 5x longer!!! this. NEEDS. to. be. LONGER! 0_0

4|5 10|10 nice!

<~DJ Clyme~>

Enzer0 responds:

Why thank ya! It had glitched when I exported the MP3, so i put it out the way you should be hearing it. You heard the end :P

[-The Day The Sorrow Fell-]

this is really nice.,.

I'm really glad you submitted this! its definitely worth listening to. i think you should turn your poem into lyrics and and add it to this song!

5|5 10|10 really easy listen :)

<~DJ Clyme~>

ChronoNomad responds:

Very much appreciated! I've been toying around with the idea of putting them together for a while now. I'll just have to work out the lyrical notes and figure out who I want to have perform them...

Hang on a sec--5/5 & 10/10, but the big shiny number in the corner says 9? Color me confuzzled... o.O

[From The Start [FP]]

my thoughts about this...

AWESOME! its hard to find artists on NG who know how to make real Dance music.

5|5 10|10 the greatest submission today!

<~DJ Clyme~>

BTW, whats the name of the synth that comes in at 0:41?

FlightPattern responds:

It's called the underrated and yet totally awesome 3X osc!

[:Skyline:]

wow

i liked this a lot! it was a little repetitive, but I've noticed that's just how trance is :)

5|5 10|10 great work ;D

KSBeats responds:

lol I knew that I didn't have say that it is repetitive xD because yes you are right, it's trance