hmmm
well this is something a bit new to me... I find it i bit, intriguing?...
hmmm
well this is something a bit new to me... I find it i bit, intriguing?...
Thank you, i went for a really different sound with orchestral instruments and ethnic drums and acoustics some with effects some without.
not bad
so i like everything except the pad. its not bad, just way to loud. and the base needs to turned up or something. other than that this is great.
5|5 9|10 nice!
BTW what synth is that at 2:27?
DJ~Clyme
Thx for voicing your opinion, appreciate it. =)
Done some recent tweaking and i have to agree with you, with the pad down and the bass more defined it sounds a fair bit cleaner for some reason. =P
And the synth at specified time is the Stellar wasp in FL studio.
Thx again. ^_^
very nice
the song may not have been perfect. but the sentiment is good, and the lyrics are great. any one who zer0 bombs this has no heart.
5|5 10|10 great work!
<~DJ Clyme~>
Thanks. Feel free to tell me what isn't perfect. I'm no expert yet but I can always try to improve.
wow
really really great! i agree with 2dpolygon though. it does sound a lot like breakbeat,
yet does have a housy feel to it. :)
5|5 10|10 great job!
<~DJ Clyme~>
Yeh i didn't quite know how to put it into genre, but I think it fits more in house. Thnx for comments!
interesting
so its uh..., definitely simple, but not bad. i would really suggest you try to do something about the cheesy FL keys. that's whats killing this song for me.
5|5 8|10 simple, but nice ;)
<~DJ Clyme~>
Thanks for the advice man
sad is understated
its awful, almost a crime! :(.... that its only 25 seconds long! OmG make it like 5x longer!!! this. NEEDS. to. be. LONGER! 0_0
4|5 10|10 nice!
<~DJ Clyme~>
Why thank ya! It had glitched when I exported the MP3, so i put it out the way you should be hearing it. You heard the end :P
this is really nice.,.
I'm really glad you submitted this! its definitely worth listening to. i think you should turn your poem into lyrics and and add it to this song!
5|5 10|10 really easy listen :)
<~DJ Clyme~>
Very much appreciated! I've been toying around with the idea of putting them together for a while now. I'll just have to work out the lyrical notes and figure out who I want to have perform them...
Hang on a sec--5/5 & 10/10, but the big shiny number in the corner says 9? Color me confuzzled... o.O
my thoughts about this...
AWESOME! its hard to find artists on NG who know how to make real Dance music.
5|5 10|10 the greatest submission today!
<~DJ Clyme~>
BTW, whats the name of the synth that comes in at 0:41?
It's called the underrated and yet totally awesome 3X osc!
wow
i liked this a lot! it was a little repetitive, but I've noticed that's just how trance is :)
5|5 10|10 great work ;D
lol I knew that I didn't have say that it is repetitive xD because yes you are right, it's trance
nice
so here are the pros: good intro. well structured. good percussion samples & synths. and the cons: the song as a whole needs to be mastered a lot better.
drums could be turned down a little( i feel like their taking away from the rest of the song) my ratings: 4|5 8|10 not bad at all ;)
Thanks alot man, I thought the same, I am gonna tune down the kicks a bit, and mess with the volume and everything.
Thanks again for the review!
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